I don’t eat as much fried chicken as I used to, but this rule of thumb is still true. Fried chicken without the skin is not as tasty. Sure, the meat is still there, but something important to the experience is missing. Reading poetry silently is a bit like eating skinless fried chicken.
Some poems have rhyming words as the end of lines, but most modern poetry seems to lack that. However, often poets will craft poems that feature alliteration and assonance and interior rhymes. Many times reading a poem aloud will help the reader not only to taste the poem, but perhaps even get meaning that might otherwise be missed.
Like all the pathways I have talked about, none of them seem to fit everyone and this one may not, at first, attract you, but I hope that you will give it a chance as I share poems for the next several posts.
I begin with a poem by Wendell Berry. It was first published in The Country of Marriage in 1973.
The Wild Geese
Horseback on Sunday morning,
harvest over, we taste persimmon
and wild grape, sharp sweet
of summer’s end. In time’s maze
over the fall fields, we name names
that went west from here, names
that rest on graves. We open
a persimmon seed to find the tree
that stands in promise,
pale, in the seed’s marrow.
Geese appear high over us,
pass, and the sky closes. Abandon,
as in love or sleep, holds
them to their way, clear,
in the ancient faith: what we need
is here. And we pray, not
for new earth or heaven, but to be
quiet in heart, and in eye
clear. What we need is here.*
Is there a phrase or an image that moves you? Is there something in this poem’s path that might help you along the way? I would love to hear from you.
As always feel free to share this post with anyone else, especially if you have found it helpful.
May you know the peace of what “is here”.
*from The Selected Poems of Wendell Berry, Berkeley, CA: Counterpoint Press, 1998, p.90.
“We open
a persimmon seed to find the tree
that stands in promise,”
the tree that stands in promise – that’s a beautiful line
It reminds me of the importance of all the seeds around us, within us, the promise of potential.
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Yes, Rebecca, that was one of the phrases that stood out to me as well. And then, “pale, in the seed’s marrow”. Not all potential looks promising and may not be easily recognized.
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